Charles River Rugby

I'm so proud of myself for taking this portrait and not needing any help...and in 5 minutes! It may seem easy to you, but I have had a hard time understanding lighting and I'm finally starting..to see the light haha. Ok, bad joke. Anyway, notes are below the photos. I can't decide which I like better..what do you think?

One SB800 off to the left

One SB800 off to the left with gel